Again the opacity for the render is bugging me.
Might want to shrink the render by 10-20% to show some of her neck.
Were you going for a monochrome feel? because it is just all red.
Yeah, I just wasn't sure how to work it out.
That render is just problematic, It might be better to start from scratch.
Anyway, what you see there is the entire render, that also being the reason why it is where it is.
It is a little too red now that you said that. >.<
And that gradient might look cool, but now that I take a second look, It's too much.
*Edit*

I improved the quality as much as I could, hopefully it's not too bad