Zilithandria Moonlight 
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There's killer ants after you!! XP
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« on: June 24, 2008, 07:27 pm » |
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 ANIME FANFICTION CROSSOVER She landed with a loud thump and groan after a long fall through a forest of trees; not five seconds after she made contact with the hard ground, though it was covered in grass soaked with the evening dew, she was already complaining. "Owww. Now where am I? And wherever I am, how did I come to this place?!"
Quickly realizing how alone she was, the seventeen year old blonde girl thought about the dangers of the night, and what they might hold for her; she struggled to sit up despite the pain that wreaked through her body. "Well, Anna, you've found yourself some trouble now." She muttered quietly to herself as she watched a lone wolf approaching. Anna found a jagged stick nearby and gripped it as she stood in a defensive position until the wolf suddenly disappeared in a "poof". "An illusion?!" She was undoubtedly startled, as who wouldn't be when they're out of sorts?
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« Last Edit: July 20, 2008, 01:53 pm by Zilithandria Moonlight »
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It's not like you're a tender dandelion,
With emotions of glass,
And it's not like I asked you to understand;
So wipe away those tears of pain now,
And bloom like a strange red rose before me,
So I can know this:
Am I good or am I evil?
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« on: June 24, 2008, 07:27 pm » |
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Use coupon code "AS2008" for $2 off of your first purchase over $20. Summer plush sale is also going on, so check it out!
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privateryann
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It's the Nihon Hikikamori Kyokai!
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Your sentences run on a bit too long, and the thought is a bit chaotic. Try to organize things a bit more, and add details where they need to be added. I would edit it, but I feel like that'd be infringing on your creative freedom or something... Well, keep practicing.
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Open Mind for a Different View
And Nothing Else Matters
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Cool, can't wait for the next installment...  |
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Lots of Demon emanate from this one
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