[Lsano]

There is 2 aliens that came to earth 10 years ago and they came from a planet that was in a deep glactic war with the Ranictics who are a Hidious race(they have a big head and they have a medium body, and there speech is not very understandable, they have 5 arms and 3 legs with a stench of rotten Blood) that has a ability to make the opponent go crazy. The aliens main government was scared that earth might get hit by the war so they sent the 2 aliens who are skilled in different combat styles. Once there they have been protecting the earth for 10 years. At the present time there was 2 school students that go to Cokos High School and when they get there they meet 2 new transfer students who are actually the aliens. But the 2 Students became friends with the Transfer students and when they are alone with the 2 students they tell the story about them and the war 10 years ago. But unknow to the aliens is that the 2 students have a great ability that no one ever knew, they can cancel the Ranictics ability, yet they are very unskilled and don't know any thing about combat so the aliens train them in the combats.

The aliens Combat styles are Close quarters and long range though they do use some of each other abilitys but one is a master at Close Quarters while the other is a master at a distance.

A follow up on the line before this one.
There is guns and magic though the magic is to enchane the aliens and humans who were trained under the aliens to be eiher long range or close quaters enchanced. One of the aliens has a powerfull sniper that is enchanced to have a longer range than a normal sniper has and the alien gets a boast in hearing and sight, and close range gots a knife and pistol which he can use while using any forms of fighting styles but most commonly Muy Thai. The other alien has a Smg that is silenced but rarely uses it and comes up to a guy uses Aikido and Muy thai and Kung fu, Kenpo. He a ability to inflict damage after the fact he hit him.


The aliens look alot like a human but more advanced like having weapons on there arms, and enchanced vision, and enchanced brain power. Though each alien has a different preference to what they use. Little minor details like there ears are more like a point but it curves into like a bun on the ears. Their eyes are little more slanted than a humans. Plus the aliens have a cloaking device that makes them look like the race they are living with I.E. a human.

The government Thinks that the Ranictics would hit earth in the near future but unknown to them they are planing to hit earth 11 years from the glatic war. And they sent the aliens to search out for the 2 humans who have the ability to cancel the Ranictics ability. They searched for 10 years while protecting earth then when they didn't find them they ask the government that the aliens are employed to, and they say go to school to learn more about humans and there lifstyles, then that is when they meet the students.


Btw this is just a idea so yea.


Plus i know there will be grammer errors., and Alot of Spelling errors. I am well aware i will fix them.

[LustrousDragon]

Not bad, and this is an improved version of the one you sent me 46 minutes ago. As I stated in the chats, the idea is going to be tough to visualize. Good going there, and it's just plain thinking from now till it's drawn on paper.

[Lsano]

Yea i know just want ideas on the plot and need some one to show me some drawings b/c i am not that good at drawling(missspelled).

[LustrousDragon]

...Professor Misspelling, I would like to inform you that perhaps you should hire a professional to do the drawing. As of ideas and suggestions, it's free so we can help.

Don't think too hard on the process. You're at the beginning, so think only about the beginning. You got the idea down, now what's next ? Write it on paper. Collect all your thinking into one sheet.

[Lsano]

actually using notepad and yea I probly would need a pro for drawing. And LD ty for that actually help and the ideas would help out alot 2. but idk any one who is a Professional drawer.

[Kisuke13]

This is a very sound idea, it's got base, structure, and story, just make sure it doesn't get you know repetitive, keep it fresh. It's not my taste in anime but it's good i say you go for it.

[LustrousDragon]

Originally Posted by Lsano

actually using notepad and yea I probly would need a pro for drawing. And LD ty for that actually help and the ideas would help out alot 2. but idk any one who is a Professional drawer.

Inform manga studios such as TokyoPop or ShonenJump, they got over 640 manga artists there. Most successful manga artists today were once these assistant artists.

[Lsano]

That could work but i might have to think about the lines then lol and names and such.

[LumFan]

not bad.. i like the idea but definately use spell check ok!

[Lsano]

I know lol Notepad fail that is all