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View Poll Results: How much did Kin's poem suck?
It was pretty good. 8 42.11%
100% 0 0%
75% 3 15.79%
50% 4 21.05%
25% 1 5.26%
0% 3 15.79%
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A crappy poem by Kin
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Not Ranked  :  0 score      Default A crappy poem by Kin - 12-24-2008, 08:32 PM
Well if you go blind don't complain! ok?

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You are so cold, hold me.
Don't let me fly away.
I need you.
I need you.
Give me your troubled lips.

I wont let you die.
At least not as long as i'm with you.

Let's not let despair set us apart.
I need you.
My beloved Dark Angel.

A tear of blood will make our wishes come true.
It's not the time to run away my beloved.
It's the time to fight back.
The angels that stole our place that we belong to.

It's time to end the chaos in our lives.
We are in front of the gates of Heaven.
We pray at God to let us please live a normal life.
Set us free.
So we can live oncemore a peacefull life.

Amen.


This prayer is made by Kin it works 99% of the time.
This prayer is to keep evil away.
This prayer will work against Satan aswell. O

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Not Ranked  :  0 score      Default Re: A crappy poem by Kin - 12-31-2008, 07:25 PM
That's pretty good Kin, not crappy. :] Very good words in the poem.
  
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Not Ranked  :  0 score      Default 03-27-2009, 09:35 PM
That could be a new song for my chemical romance or something close v.v
  
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Not Ranked  :  0 score      Default 03-28-2009, 05:35 PM
I like the way you ended the poem:
"Amen"
This would make for an interestin' prayer before dinner.

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Not Ranked  :  0 score      Default 04-05-2009, 02:44 PM
The use of the words in the context was good.....but i doubt it will work against 'EVIL' its just a poem

Its pretty good

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Not Ranked  :  0 score      Default 04-05-2009, 04:36 PM
It was pretty good but there is some of it I didn't feel. so I'm about half and half.


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Not Ranked  :  0 score      Default 08-20-2009, 02:29 PM
It was a great poem, although it's a tad bit hard to find the meaning and what you're trying to convey. but overall, good job, Kin!



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Not Ranked  :  0 score      Default 08-23-2009, 08:37 PM
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I like the way you ended the poem:
"Amen"
This would make for an interestin' prayer before dinner.
Agreed.

  
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Not Ranked  :  0 score      Default 08-28-2009, 03:30 AM
Are you sure this was meant to keep evil away? It seemed a bit dark to me.


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